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Sarah and Ash by *aaronmizuno:iconaaronmizuno:

Categories Manga/Anime > Digital Media > Drawings

©2009 *aaronmizuno
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Artist's Comments

I know that this should be the long overdue Kiriban that I'm posting, but I had to break through some artistic blockage first.

openCanvas 4.5 and my under-loved Wacom tablet helped me... Van Halen too. <3

It's surprising how hard it is to pull away from WoW, even after the daily quests are done. I'm glad I did.

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*TerribleToadQueen Apr 22, 2009, 9:57:11 AM
Their expressions lead me to believe that Ash has a more aggressive personality than Sarah. I think their gestures do a good job of highlighting the characters' contrasting body proportions. Proportionally I think the arms may be too long and thin in places and hands maybe too big or fingers too long. You are close. I think you should try doing Ash's freckles in the coloring/shading stage and see how that looks. The sketch style makes them stand out more than I personally think they should. Overall a really great piece. Now they need a stunning background. Can't wait to see more.
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