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Mercury Aqua Mirage Closeup by *aaronmizuno:iconaaronmizuno:

Categories Fan Art > Manga/Anime > Digital > Movies/TV

©2009 *aaronmizuno
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Artist's Comments

Went with the .png for this smaller image. Apologies for the added load time.

Obviously this would be before the array of projectiles that the attack would fire... but it's the emotion that was important in this, not so much the attack.

Critiques


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=melody-musique May 30, 2009, 7:12:29 PM
okayyyy o3o

Good stuff:
-coloring beautiful!
-background awesome
-hair looks good o3o
- expression stands out :iconurhappyplz: lol
- hands look great~

Things you should concider working on

-skirt: looks too flat D:, add some waves to make it look slightly more flowy and realistic to the background
-ribbon: same as above
- mouth: something seems off... i dont think its the mouth size itself. but the way its colored. perhaps the tongue is showed a little too much?
-and like the other critique said. its hard to tell wether she is being lifted or if she's on her knees.

other wise. it looks pretty fabtastic o3o keep it up~
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*TerribleToadQueen May 27, 2009, 11:23:30 AM
I'm not familiar with this attack. I don't know if you're creating your own pose or basing your gesture off of one from the series. The gesture seems a little awkward to me. Maybe because I don't know if she's falling to her knees or being lifted. The emotion certainly grabs my attention. The tears kinda throw me. The combo of fury and angst in her expression makes me want to know more about what's happening. I would expect to see this expression accompanied with battle wounds yet she doesn't have a scratch on her. As always your attention to hand detail and hair make my happy. Personally I'd like to see a contrasting color to offset all of the blue.
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~Dustclaw May 27, 2009, 11:46:03 AM
ummm.... this is Sailor Moon....right? o.0

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*aaronmizuno May 28, 2009, 3:46:24 AM
Sailor Mercury actually =3
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~Dustclaw May 28, 2009, 12:16:39 PM
lol, cool :clap: do u use photoshop? :eager: plz tellz meh!!!

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"I kick puppies.
What? You think that's wrong? I'll tell you what's wrong. Cell Phone companies charging roaming fees when you leave your home calling area, that's the wrongest. That's why I have Boost Moble."
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*aaronmizuno May 28, 2009, 2:44:43 PM
I had a sketch which I scanned in. From there I traced the image in flash. I took that line-work and dropped it into openCanvas where I colored it.
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~Dustclaw May 28, 2009, 4:30:12 PM
Flash? openCanvas? :confused: ummm... what are those? xD

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"I kick puppies.
What? You think that's wrong? I'll tell you what's wrong. Cell Phone companies charging roaming fees when you leave your home calling area, that's the wrongest. That's why I have Boost Moble."
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*aaronmizuno May 29, 2009, 7:44:30 PM
Flash is what you'll find all over Newgrounds.com. It's a vector graphics program that is similar to illustrator but geared for animation, websites and game creation.

openCanvas is a spiffy program that synergizes well with those fancy Wacom tablets that lets you draw directly to your computer. I like using it for coloring. <3
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~Dustclaw May 30, 2009, 4:28:05 PM
HEY! do u have a pen tablet? if so, how did u install it? i have recently aquired a Wacom Bamboo Fun pen tablet in small for myself, and it would be a big help if you could tell me...
1. after you plug in the USB cord, and put the CD installer in, what do you do?
2. what happens if a window pops up and says: "has stopped working"?
3. how would the cordless mouse work?
4. could i use the cordless mouse on my computer, without using the pen tablet?

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Icon by ~Bircfallstar

"I kick puppies.
What? You think that's wrong? I'll tell you what's wrong. Cell Phone companies charging roaming fees when you leave your home calling area, that's the wrongest. That's why I have Boost Moble."
:iconaaronmizuno:
*aaronmizuno May 30, 2009, 6:25:08 PM
When I installed my tablet, I installed the software from the disc, plugged the bugger in and went to town. Never had a 'has stopped working' error.

The mouse works the same as the pen, it only works when you have it on the tablet.
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~Dustclaw May 30, 2009, 7:37:12 PM
so you had no problems? none at all? just plugged it in and it worked after u installed it with th CD? o.0 i finally get one and i dun know how to install it -.-

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"I kick puppies.
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